Revamp in Progress

So, I haven't yet edited the first chapter. While the second chapter is almost done, I've decided to completely revamp the whole story. Switch it from 3rd Person to 1st Person point of view. I'm halfway done with the first chapter, revamped and edited. It's much better than it was before, although Mocha seems to have lost some of his naivety and become rather...erm...vengeful, to say the least, towards the corporation that created him. But yes. Look back here often; the revamped chapter one and brand new chapter two will soon be posted~